current chapter word count: 3998
scene structure: Breakfast - Omi's arrival - At the cafe - House visit of Hell - Talk Shop - to Shibaura - exorcism 1 - discovery - exorcism 2 - in the shadow of Rainbow Bridge - Ueno Station - Tree visit [complete, incomplete]
more because Talk shop & exorcism 2 were completed
less because the first part (from Breakfast to Talk Shop) was decluttered and condensed; the second part got more pace with a strengthened (if still incomplete) exorcism 2
amount of chapter complete: 75% (of which 60% are in continuous, tinkered text)
character being slightly less obvious in his kinks: Subaru
character being a better host (of sorts): Seishiro
character getting his drama post mortem: Romiro
and it's all for... the cops.
quote of the day: "You're going to pay for this."
Unrelated side-note: I'm currently watching the Korean drama "Gumiho - the nine tailed fox". While the first two eps with characters and setting being introduced were kind of slow and the fated romance bit felt a bit heavy, since ep 3 that's nicely balanced with action, intrigues and ploys that wouldn't have made sense without the slow stuff before. If you are a fan of urban fantasy, Asian myths, and hardcore police thriller shot through with Romeo & Juliet, go for it! I'm currently at ep 12 and certainly want to know what happens next! Which means, I don't know for sure - and given that I can tell the events in most Western tv shows from the middle of ep 1, that's a big plus in my books! :-)
scene structure: Breakfast - Omi's arrival - At the cafe - House visit of Hell - Talk Shop - to Shibaura - exorcism 1 - discovery - exorcism 2 - in the shadow of Rainbow Bridge - Ueno Station - Tree visit [complete, incomplete]
more because Talk shop & exorcism 2 were completed
less because the first part (from Breakfast to Talk Shop) was decluttered and condensed; the second part got more pace with a strengthened (if still incomplete) exorcism 2
amount of chapter complete: 75% (of which 60% are in continuous, tinkered text)
character being slightly less obvious in his kinks: Subaru
character being a better host (of sorts): Seishiro
character getting his drama post mortem: Romiro
and it's all for... the cops.
quote of the day: "You're going to pay for this."
Unrelated side-note: I'm currently watching the Korean drama "Gumiho - the nine tailed fox". While the first two eps with characters and setting being introduced were kind of slow and the fated romance bit felt a bit heavy, since ep 3 that's nicely balanced with action, intrigues and ploys that wouldn't have made sense without the slow stuff before. If you are a fan of urban fantasy, Asian myths, and hardcore police thriller shot through with Romeo & Juliet, go for it! I'm currently at ep 12 and certainly want to know what happens next! Which means, I don't know for sure - and given that I can tell the events in most Western tv shows from the middle of ep 1, that's a big plus in my books! :-)