FM-PMS

current chapter word count: 9494
restructured scenes: @Home lost Seishiro's part and the "coming home" bit, but will gain a more contemplative Subaru with his ferns. In addition there's another tree scene
any of that completed? not yet, but both are structured and partially written
required change: gS&M will have to be on the phone (marked, not done yet)
resulting in: no more info dumps, no more OOC thinking, a lot less boring
character feeling oddly at home among ferns: Subaru (and he should probably worry about that!)
character finally finding a comfortable place to think about Kali!Subaru: Seishiro
character who is a pest when trying to be comforting: Tree-san
character having an itch that is not Subaru: also Tree-san
quote of the day: ...he had you with your ass in the air...