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current chapter word count: 8346 (of which approx. 900 are new words!)
scenes worked on today: everything in the Kokyo East Gardens
resulting in more streamlined, speedier tale; less clutter, less filler-stuff
change complete? not yet, the clearance check and Michiko intro Mariko is still missing
character finally more ambiguous: Michiko
character now appearing less of a dork: Subaru
characters who still have to be adapted: kids in the park
because of Godzilla & Hello Kitty, of course
quote of the day: The killing of the inner circle wouldn't have been required.
scenes worked on today: everything in the Kokyo East Gardens
resulting in more streamlined, speedier tale; less clutter, less filler-stuff
change complete? not yet, the clearance check and Michiko intro Mariko is still missing
character finally more ambiguous: Michiko
character now appearing less of a dork: Subaru
characters who still have to be adapted: kids in the park
because of Godzilla & Hello Kitty, of course
quote of the day: The killing of the inner circle wouldn't have been required.
