current chapter word count: 3298
less because "Fuma on the phone" lost against "TSF" for good (though I still becry the loss of Suoh's "You slept with--!?" shock, which is now likely going to be just another outtake), but TSF is a much more poignant way of presenting the important details!
scenes worked on today: Yue's watch (50% new), Ameru 2 (no more Hokuto!)
remaining issues: Omi's scene reads flat; Yue, Subaru & Seishiro don't get along with each other
characters not getting enough of sleep: Subaru, Seishiro, Nokoru (yes, despite Fuma not being on the phone!)
character at least getting a spooky coffee: Subaru
quote of the day: "Fuma...?"
less because "Fuma on the phone" lost against "TSF" for good (though I still becry the loss of Suoh's "You slept with--!?" shock, which is now likely going to be just another outtake), but TSF is a much more poignant way of presenting the important details!
scenes worked on today: Yue's watch (50% new), Ameru 2 (no more Hokuto!)
remaining issues: Omi's scene reads flat; Yue, Subaru & Seishiro don't get along with each other
characters not getting enough of sleep: Subaru, Seishiro, Nokoru (yes, despite Fuma not being on the phone!)
character at least getting a spooky coffee: Subaru
quote of the day: "Fuma...?"