The first round of editing revealed a troublesome scene, which has to be redone in a different manner in order to properly deWIMP Subaru in the rest.
[For the information of those who know what a where are the hands!?!-scene is: yes, it is one of those! (The rest: don't ask)]
I hope to get the chapter back on track within a week.
[Note: within a week, not within the week.]
:)
[For the information of those who know what a where are the hands!?!-scene is: yes, it is one of those! (The rest: don't ask)]
I hope to get the chapter back on track within a week.
[Note: within a week, not within the week.]
:)
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Date: 2008-09-12 01:01 (UTC)From:...but only a little...
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Date: 2008-09-12 02:22 (UTC)From:On the plus side: my scribbled idea seems to work (at least for me, though we might still argue about a word or two). I'm confident that you'll have a new file by Sunday morning. :)