BAUplan - On Vacation > edited the editing

[akk]

As usual when sending a file to solo for beta-ing, a few days later I spot (a) how to improve the ending and (b) how to include the outtake I regretted deleting, resulting in the

real pre-edit word count: 22534 (previously 20651) on 44 A4 pages (previously 40).
number of major outtakes: 0 (Yup! Spiritual Spelunking is in, albeit in a streamlined version with less speleologist admonishments!)
major deviations from planned plot: unchanged

oh, and now there's more purple and less orange, a right instead of a left hand, and clams associated with sakura. ;)

Stay tuned!

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Oh, I'm tuned. :)

Ruth