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BAUplan - ch'i given willingly
current chapter word count: 15146
scene currently written: ch'i given willingly
scene completed? mostly - as in the actions and procedures are there, the timing is okay, but the wording - and some of the descriptive elements - still need improvement. It's been too long since I wrote about tanden, five elements, and tantric sexual practices (and Wikipedia lost some of the useful details in recents years!) And then there's the problem that the scene in total is probably too long to fit its importance for the plot, so once everything works, I have to see how to cut it in shape!
scene(s) to be written next: receiving ch'i (and then it's exorcism or bust!)
character realizing he isn't the only one being in over his head: Subaru
character surprisingly naive at 35: Seishiro
character just not staying on topic: also Seishiro
item not used as intended: a shirt
quote of today:
"That explains the unbuttoned shirt."
Subaru laughed, self-conscious. "Actually, I need the feeling of cloth to remind me what this is all about."
scene currently written: ch'i given willingly
scene completed? mostly - as in the actions and procedures are there, the timing is okay, but the wording - and some of the descriptive elements - still need improvement. It's been too long since I wrote about tanden, five elements, and tantric sexual practices (and Wikipedia lost some of the useful details in recents years!) And then there's the problem that the scene in total is probably too long to fit its importance for the plot, so once everything works, I have to see how to cut it in shape!
scene(s) to be written next: receiving ch'i (and then it's exorcism or bust!)
character realizing he isn't the only one being in over his head: Subaru
character surprisingly naive at 35: Seishiro
character just not staying on topic: also Seishiro
item not used as intended: a shirt
quote of today:
"That explains the unbuttoned shirt."
Subaru laughed, self-conscious. "Actually, I need the feeling of cloth to remind me what this is all about."