![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
Entry tags:
Galaxy Ranger Edits - Mission Report 23
Editing CS 3: beloved dream scene and subsequent psi-operation condensed and resurrected at a later place in plot. With an external focus, the nightmare is now done in four lines, befitting the changes made to the plot in CS 2 (read: ST proliferation and countermeasures thereof). - in short: now it adds value to the plot and author iz a happy! :D
His hands were covered in blood. Bright-red it reached up to his elbows. Fingernails had transformed into claws, pealing the skin off a crying infant's belly.
"No sign of active adaptation, sir."
"Discard. The next. And hurry, there are many children waiting to be tested—"
...I might need an infanticide warning, though. *eep*
His hands were covered in blood. Bright-red it reached up to his elbows. Fingernails had transformed into claws, pealing the skin off a crying infant's belly.
"No sign of active adaptation, sir."
"Discard. The next. And hurry, there are many children waiting to be tested—"
...I might need an infanticide warning, though. *eep*