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current chapter word count: 7415
scenes worked on today: Granny Talk 2 (the umpteenth revision), Daylight Sex, Elder Council (now much more complete)
resulting in: important points now better balanced between GT2 & EC (also less repetition in all three scenes)
character giving up on pretense and driving his point home: Subaru
character going to have his moment in EC: Seishiro
quote of the day: "...and *you* want to address the council *about duty*?"
Related side-note: Granny Talk 2, Daylight Sex and Elder Council form a scene triptych with GT2 as the anchor. The issues that kept me from finishing DS and EC all stemmed from problems in GT2, forcing me to revise the scene again and again. Granny was sure one stubborn woman / elder / onmyoji in this one. But I'm confident that the issues are solved now.
scenes worked on today: Granny Talk 2 (the umpteenth revision), Daylight Sex, Elder Council (now much more complete)
resulting in: important points now better balanced between GT2 & EC (also less repetition in all three scenes)
character giving up on pretense and driving his point home: Subaru
character going to have his moment in EC: Seishiro
quote of the day: "...and *you* want to address the council *about duty*?"
Related side-note: Granny Talk 2, Daylight Sex and Elder Council form a scene triptych with GT2 as the anchor. The issues that kept me from finishing DS and EC all stemmed from problems in GT2, forcing me to revise the scene again and again. Granny was sure one stubborn woman / elder / onmyoji in this one. But I'm confident that the issues are solved now.
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