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FM-PMS
current chapter word count: 5752 of which 4432 words are exactly as I want them (and one part is still a complete mess to the point that I marked it for deletion and will try to start fresh with it).
problem part: the Twin Star Fuma meeting
issues: probably everything (again). The change of location allowed the events to flow finally, but the point of view doesn't work any longer. Alternative povs are: Twin Star Fuma (no, I think that might break the overall mood), Kamui (kind of limited given the necessary content and his animosity towards Seishiro), Subaru (that's the current one, and I don't get it to work), Seishiro (ditto), and Suoh (but he's the least involved and a minor secondary character to boot).
in short: still stuck
author comment (1) on that: *GGGGRRROWWWLLLLLLL!*
author reaction (2): goes to search for her heavy boots to give her muse a firm kick in its lazy ar-- *ahem* chairwarmer.
problem part: the Twin Star Fuma meeting
issues: probably everything (again). The change of location allowed the events to flow finally, but the point of view doesn't work any longer. Alternative povs are: Twin Star Fuma (no, I think that might break the overall mood), Kamui (kind of limited given the necessary content and his animosity towards Seishiro), Subaru (that's the current one, and I don't get it to work), Seishiro (ditto), and Suoh (but he's the least involved and a minor secondary character to boot).
in short: still stuck
author comment (1) on that: *GGGGRRROWWWLLLLLLL!*
author reaction (2): goes to search for her heavy boots to give her muse a firm kick in its lazy ar-- *ahem* chairwarmer.