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FM-PMS (state of the edit)
current frontline: 81/207 (~40%)
to be continued with chapter 10.
Chapter 9 was interesting to work on. There were two issues my editor felt no properly connected with the plot and one spot that I found disagreeably complicated written. The result is that I took out one reference ("Owl"), expanded elaborately - but hopefully not excessively so - on Subaru realizing their mutual blindness, and restructured the train trip. Actually more changes than expected, but hopefully for the better of the plot.
to be continued with chapter 10.
Chapter 9 was interesting to work on. There were two issues my editor felt no properly connected with the plot and one spot that I found disagreeably complicated written. The result is that I took out one reference ("Owl"), expanded elaborately - but hopefully not excessively so - on Subaru realizing their mutual blindness, and restructured the train trip. Actually more changes than expected, but hopefully for the better of the plot.