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chapter 19
This edit begins to feel embarrassingly like a rewrite (of at least 50% or so). Okay, less dramatic: it's more adding / revamping details to account for missed plot threads and continuity issues, but still... *whine*
On the plus side, this gives me enough new text tomindfuck entertain you all with a teaser:
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"Why are you still here?" he asked, tiredly. "Sado is gone. You can move on now."
Yue shrugged daintily and smiled. "I don't want to. This is too interesting."
"But your unresolved responsibility is fulfilled."
"And I thank you for that. I'm sure Sei-chan's life is a lot easier now." Yue sounded amused. "If only with respect to his basement. The Sakura sends word that it accepts your claim, as long as his continuing service is unaffected."
chapter 19
This edit begins to feel embarrassingly like a rewrite (of at least 50% or so). Okay, less dramatic: it's more adding / revamping details to account for missed plot threads and continuity issues, but still... *whine*
On the plus side, this gives me enough new text to
"Why are you still here?" he asked, tiredly. "Sado is gone. You can move on now."
Yue shrugged daintily and smiled. "I don't want to. This is too interesting."
"But your unresolved responsibility is fulfilled."
"And I thank you for that. I'm sure Sei-chan's life is a lot easier now." Yue sounded amused. "If only with respect to his basement. The Sakura sends word that it accepts your claim, as long as his continuing service is unaffected."