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akkcurrent chapter word count: 5388 (less due to severe tinkering of all the coughed up text)
resulting in a better constructed Subaru-part with less filler stuff & a snappier - and more alert/useful - Seishiro before that.
amount of chapter considered done for good: 35%
amount of chapter written but needs improvement: 20%
amount of chapter existent in fragments: 20%
amount of chapter to be done from scratch: 100 % - the above (do the math!)
character cursing his glasses to be absent in bed: Seishiro
character happy that he won't have to forgo them under the shower: also Seishiro
because elder Makoto did not accept his offer (*eg*)
character developing a wry sort of humor away from Kyoto: Ameru
issues to be addressed later: Subaru's use of Seishiro in Kyoto
scenes to be addressed next: kids in the park, Mariko
quote of the day: "Presentable, if possible."
resulting in a better constructed Subaru-part with less filler stuff & a snappier - and more alert/useful - Seishiro before that.
amount of chapter considered done for good: 35%
amount of chapter written but needs improvement: 20%
amount of chapter existent in fragments: 20%
amount of chapter to be done from scratch: 100 % - the above (do the math!)
character cursing his glasses to be absent in bed: Seishiro
character happy that he won't have to forgo them under the shower: also Seishiro
because elder Makoto did not accept his offer (*eg*)
character developing a wry sort of humor away from Kyoto: Ameru
issues to be addressed later: Subaru's use of Seishiro in Kyoto
scenes to be addressed next: kids in the park, Mariko
quote of the day: "Presentable, if possible."
